Hotel website made by 1.6 New Caledonia MLE

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nstudio
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Re: Hotel website made by 1.6 New Caledonia MLE

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I changed that line. Thanks for note.
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Post by replytomk3 »

Still not right. It should be "waits for you" or "awaits you". Get a native speaker to proofread English sites.
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Re: Hotel website made by 1.6 New Caledonia MLE

Post by pixelita »

There are a LOT of errors in the copy in English.  (I can't vouch for Hungarian and German, however.) 

I am a web designer in Houston, Texas and I hold an Bachelor of Arts degree in English (Trinity Univ.., San Antonio, Texas, 1981). I'd be happy to go over anyone's web copy. Just contact me off forum. Typos and grammatical inconsistencies is a big pet peeve of mine.  Don't feel bad, though. There are a lot of sloppy, wrong sites being done by people for whom English IS their native tongue.  (But my web design partner has me spoiled.  He's a native Serb and his English is just as good or better than most Americans'.)  :)

Now, about the site.  Love it. I do have an issue with the large image in the middle overflowing the box (design) margins on the left and right, but this could be a deliberate design effect.  I'm viewing the site in Firefox 3.x, on a Windows machine.

But I love the design, especially the reservations box.  The gallery and the flash images in the banner show just enough great photos to make the visitor hunger for more.  Very enticing.

What module did you use for the Google zooming map on the contact page?
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